It was the day when you left me
I was broken in to pieces
I don’t know the reason why you left me all alone in this scary world
I waited for you but there was no sigh of your return
Time slipped like the sand in my hands
The only thing left was the memories you left behind
The sky is dark covered by the ashes of our relation
I tried to forget you
I tried to collect all the broken pieces of my heart
I started joining them again
But like a broken glass piece I could still see the cracks on it
These cracks always reminded me of you
Everyday I wake up with my pillow wet
I started hurting people without any reason
But why am I hurting others because of you
I want the answer
I was restless
So decided to search for the answer
Couldn’t find it any where in this world
Understood that it is only you who can answer me
Now I am back
With the wounds as fresh as you gave me
Now I still see the flame burning under the ashes
And I want the answers now
For all the sleepless nights I have spent
For every question deep inside me burning me every day
And want to know the reason why you left me
I want the answers
I want the answers right now right here
I just want the answer why you destroyed my world ,why you left me..??
22 Feelings Expressed:
Just one word "WOW"
U r growing rapidly, last 2 posts were well expressed and now its well expressed in a poetic way
Great keep writing :)
Take care
Jagan
hi jii:) its like a poem expressing deep sorrow which is hidden behind those words...
expecting more like this from you...
keep going
just brilliant..
but kinda sad..
this is my fav line
With the wounds as fresh as you gave me
Now I still see the flame burning under the ashes
wonderful work satya sree..
Maybe there isn't any easy answer, and maybe any and every answer is just going to hurt more... although I really hope that's not true...
Interesting read this... cheers...
@Shivraj
Thanku annaya..thanku very much :)
@Prabhu
Hello Prabhujii..thanks 4 reading my post :)
thanku jii.. I ll certainly wirte sm more of dis kind 4 sure.
once agn thanks 4 commenting Prabhujii :)
@Amal
Hey Amal..thanku , thanku very much buddy :)
yeah dis is kinda sad...rather than sad I would like 2 describe it as d pain deep inside her :)
@Arnab
May be you are rite..but..that pain cannot b more painful than the pain she is facing nw.
Jus mayb.....
anyways...Thanku 4 stoping by n reading my post
Hope 2 c u around.
Thanku :)
u have been tagged..
check my post!!
m speechless wonder girlll...
with this m sure that u r a gift,..!!
a wonder in urself..
keep writing dear u got gr8 potential of becoming a big poet/////
@Amal
thanku yaar :)
@Shiv Kiran
Thanku very much BB:)
Poetry in motion :)
loved it :)
take care mate... cheers...
thnks for passing on my blog...just came to urs :)...ur poem was soo nice it was filled with words of emotions and life :)...good work :)..
urs..hemu..
@Arv
Hey thanku very much :)
@Hemanth
thanku very much 4 gng through my work :)
Sattu.. nice job..
@Neev
thanku Neev :)
Beautiful lines... and Yeah I know how painful it is :)
@Sowmi
thanku :)
Yeah...its really very painful :)
Hope 2 c u again :)
The asnwer of the questions that you r finding, r merely found. Coz if d persn hs ne answer den he myt nt leave u, but unanswered ques. r part of our lyf, dat makes ur growing stronger nd better..........
Well,a well written one, but yea keep sum more precision on rhyme....
kkk
@The Aspirant
hmm...mayb u r rite..
yup..ll keep it in mind
thanku :)
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