You came to me and turned my world in to a paradise
Each and every moment was so special
You were like a ray of hope to survive in this world
Then you suddenly left me
I was searching for the light,that hope to live
The light which once was the reason to live has left me
When I started to live in the darkness
You came back
You broke the silence and shattered darkness
And again made me feel like heaven
This time you returned to me with boundless love and care
Its eternal bliss to be with you
But deep in my heart Im afraid
Will you again leave me?
22 Feelings Expressed:
hmm.. i can understand the fear...
but wats better is to keep that doubt out of ur mind and live each moment to its fullest..
awesome writing by the way.. :)
take care
@Amal
Yeah.. you are rite :)
Thanku :)
Takecare
Keep smiling :)
Don't think about the person leaving you from the moment he enters.. just enjoy the moment with him... you can face when things happen.. Keep smiling.. Live the present and don't be futuristic...
beautifully penned :)
truly legitimate fear...but then that's wat we call life..living each moment n not hoping n expecting much other than the timely bliss can make us all feel better at times :)
nice one ter :)
hey yaar ur fear is nt worthless, but u knw if dis fear vl remain den u can nt even live dis moment to fullest....so live in present, neithr think abt future nd nor remember abt d past....
cheers
I AM SPEECHLESS!
DO U KNOW SOMETHING ABOUT WHAT ALL WENT IN MY PERSONAL LIFE IN MY ONE MONTH AXILE FROM NET... ??? I dont know what made u pen this!
This is real
this is a story!
this is my story!
cant say more...
@Sowmi
:)
Thanku dear
takecare
keep smiling :)
@PJ
yeah you are rite but..there gonna be a fear for sure in everyones heart. Atleast when tht person leaves you once and again comesback..
Thanku dear
takecare
keep smiling :)
@The Aspirant
Yup I agree with you :)
Thanks yaar
Takecare
Keep smiling :)
@Pulkit
Welcome here.
Well.. No I don know anything about you. Not even a bit and knowing something about your personal life it something impossible for me.
Just wanna say.. there are many people who go through the same situation.Its just that we think its only we who go through all that pain and curse ourself and our luck or fate.
So don worry friend everything gonna be alright. :)
And trust me.. I really donno anything about you I jus know you through your beautiful writeups :)
Thankyou :)
Takecare
Keep smiling :)
what to say... just.. plz don't b afraid... always think possitive...;)
beautifully written
awesome blog
u got one more follower ;)
Awesome sattuuuu >:D<
absolutely ryt thought u penned down...:)
each n every person is afraid of dis situation..bt wen it occurs..lyf itself teaches how to deal wid it :)
bt yea...i must say..u wrote it wonderfully!!
take care!!
keep smilling...:)
luv u >:D< >:D< >:D<
This is a very true depiction of any gal's mind.. coz it is true we are afraid of losing the person.. as much we become closer ..our insecurity increases simultaneously..!
good post :)
keep writing :)
@Neev
Thanku dear :)
@Vandana
Welcome to my blog :)
Thanku very much :)
Takecare
Keep smiling :)
@Neha
You are right dear.. Life teaches you everything.
Thanku very much.
Love you too >:D<>:D<>:D<
takecare
keep smiling
@Pinkzz
Welcome to my blog :)
Yeah.. insecurity do increase atleast aftr tht person once leaves you and then return again in to your life.
Thanks for visiting.
Hope to c u around.
Takecare
Keep smiling :)
When we are not in love we are afraid of falling in love and once we fall in love we are afraid of losing it. Fear takes over.
Loved every word of it.
@Jal Pari
Welcome to my blog dear :)
Hmm.. you are right.
But I just wanna say onething.. If you trust that person truly.. then I don think this fear ever exists.
But in this case.. tht person came back..I mean.. he once left her and again hes back.. so the gal is afraid and has a small insecurity feeling tht mayb he ll again leave her.
Takecare
Hope to see you around.
wowwie..nice...poem
:)
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Lovely work..
An added element of fear....
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