Each and every moment I spent with you
I lived in
You closed my eyes and took me to an unknown place
I never asked you about the place coz I had faith in you
I was enjoying being in your cosy arms
Though I was blind folded with your gentle hands
I never bothered about the place.
You took me to a place where I could feel the air touching me
The air was gushing into my veins
It was pure..as pure as you
You asked me to count to 5 and then open my eyes
I never wanted to cheat you
Coz I trusted you
Trusted you more than anyone in my life
1………
2…
3……
4…
5
I opened my eyes
Im standing on the top of a hill.
Clouds were right above me.
I could even touch them.
It was splendid
It would have been a promised land if you were with me
I turned back
I din see you anywhere
I was standing alone
All alone at the edge of the cliff
I called you..
I called your name
I could just hear my echo but never a reply from you
Now Im like a dark cloud raining continuously
I cried , I yelled , I screamed
But you never returned
I wanted to call you but my voice din support me
It never understood what you are to me as my heart does
Now Im at the end of my life
And my only wish is to see you
See you once
And die in your arms.
Can you fulfill my wish ?
My last wish…
21 Feelings Expressed:
it might sound repetitive.. but all of ur posts are so fully filled with intense emotions..
loved this post..but i dont know..the ending was depressing..it shdnt be treated as the end. there is always an alternative..
@Amal
Thanku Amal :)
Well.. why do you see it as the end.
Maybe if that person comes back and maybe his touch tender touch can bring her back to life :)
Its just.. maybe..
Takecare
Keep Smiling :)
kinda very emotional this was.... if's and maybe is all the answer i guess? the pain of no return...i cant imagine :(!... hope yu OK there!
Very depressing!
@Hary
Thanku.
Hey Im fine.
This kinda fiction.
You please don worry about it :)
Takecare
Keep Smiling :)
And Thanku very much :)
@Sowmi
:)
takecare dear
A heart touching one as usual :( :)
this was a blissful read!
from heaven of love to hallows of pain and unfulfilment - it was truly worth being a part of - emotions set free!
PS - it seemed autobiographical, rather then fictious
A very heart touching poem!
You are an amazing writer :).
Keep penning!
i loved it :)
that was really beautiful.
:)
keep up the good work
_sorcerer
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@Satish
Thanku dear :)
Takecare
Keep Smiling
@Pulkit
Oh wow.. tht was more than jus a comment,means a lott to me.
Thanku :)
Well..my poems nt jus mine even the poems which I read in ur blog I feel they are true I mean..ur gng through all those thngs.
I donno whether Im rite or wrong.
But the poems which I pen down arey a bit of fiction n real.
So it depends on the way you see,which part to be considered as real and which one as ficiton..it depends on you. :)
Takecare yaar
Keep Smiling :)
@Jal Pari
thanku very much dear :)
Takecare
Keep SMiling :)
@Dhanya
:)
Takecare
@Pinkzz
I'm glad that you loved it :)
Thanku very much:)
Takecare
@Sorcerer
Welcome to my blog :)
Thanku very much :)
Hope to see you around.
Takecare
Keep Smiling :)
That was sad.. a trust broken.. and a lot of pain
good work...
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@Workhard
hmm..
Thanku :)
Takecare
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