The nights are scary,
Dreams turned in to nightmares,
Im afraid to close my eyes.
There is a huge void formed inside of me.
In the morning the reflection of light hides it from everyone,
But as darkness creeps in , the hole starts appearing.
It is nothing but vaccum.
It sucks me in.
Im unable to breathe,
Im afraid , Im may lose my life.
Come back..Come back and fill the void.
Give me your breathe and save my life.
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28 Feelings Expressed:
felt as If I was talkin to myself
i loved d write .!
touching..
hey yaar wad happened???
its too painful............
@Pulkit
:(
:)
Takecare
@Pinkzz
Thanku so much :)
@The Aspirant
arey yaar..nthng..every thng is 5n :)
u really set emotions free with every post of urs
keep writing
luvd the snap used! Perfect for the words I say! Luvd the feel these words giv. At times the ability to feel the sadness re assures me that m still human :P cheers
@Vandy
:)
Thanku :)
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@Sawan
Hahaha.. Thanku :)
Takecare
Wonderful..
It sounds really very honest...I like that!
dear satyu,
I wish to ask u if u wud be willing/be intrested, to work with me on a write up...actually I want to co write a story with u.
mail me whatever ur reply is @ pulkit.tiwari@gmail.com
I shall be waiting,
regards
Pulkit
Your blog has a lot of sadness in life. I came here after the post you made on mine, and I have no words to express the sadness I feel that is in you. I hope you find happiness. Just remember...This too shall pass. You won't know the meaning of a real high unless you hit the ultimate low :-). Keep smiling.
@Pavitra
Thanku.. :)
N welcome to my world :)
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@Pulkit
I would love to :)
Thanku very much :)
@KM
I absolutely agree with the last lines :)
Thanku :)
N abt sadness.. Well not exactly.. Im happy too with my frnz n all and when Im sad I come up with these writeups just to vent it out.Thats it :)
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btw..Welcome :)
u r way too good!!this exuded so much of pain.
Ouch! :(
First time here ..Awesome poem ! Your words made me go through this and ouch it hurts !! Good work gal !
Beautifully written. Could feel it totally!
Thanks for your comment. Glad you liked my poem!
@Ria
Thanku :)
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@adreamygal
:)
Thanku :)
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@Danya
Oops..sollie :)
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@Wink
Thanku :)
Your poems are too good :)
Takecare
Nice work!!
Loved the lines and it meant it :)
Awww :(
Sometimes I get this feeling!
Nice writings! =)
And I love your blog template ! :) :)
@Sorcerer
Thanku :)
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@Esther
Thanku :)
n Welcome to Emotions Set Free :)
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