Thursday, March 25, 2010

Save My Life




The nights are scary,

Dreams turned in to nightmares,

Im afraid to close my eyes.

There is a huge void formed inside of me.

In the morning the reflection of light hides it from everyone,

But as darkness creeps in , the hole starts appearing.

It is nothing but vaccum.

It sucks me in.

Im unable to breathe,

Im afraid , Im may lose my life.

Come back..Come back and fill the void.

Give me your breathe and save my life.

28 Feelings Expressed:

PULKIT said...

felt as If I was talkin to myself

PinkZz said...

i loved d write .!
touching..

The Aspirant said...

hey yaar wad happened???
its too painful............

SatyU said...

@Pulkit

:(

:)

Takecare

SatyU said...

@Pinkzz

Thanku so much :)

SatyU said...

@The Aspirant

arey yaar..nthng..every thng is 5n :)

vandy said...

u really set emotions free with every post of urs

keep writing

sawan said...

luvd the snap used! Perfect for the words I say! Luvd the feel these words giv. At times the ability to feel the sadness re assures me that m still human :P cheers

SatyU said...

@Vandy
:)
Thanku :)

Takecare

SatyU said...

@Sawan
Hahaha.. Thanku :)

Takecare

Pavitra .... said...

Wonderful..
It sounds really very honest...I like that!

PULKIT said...

dear satyu,
I wish to ask u if u wud be willing/be intrested, to work with me on a write up...actually I want to co write a story with u.
mail me whatever ur reply is @ pulkit.tiwari@gmail.com

I shall be waiting,
regards
Pulkit

KM said...

Your blog has a lot of sadness in life. I came here after the post you made on mine, and I have no words to express the sadness I feel that is in you. I hope you find happiness. Just remember...This too shall pass. You won't know the meaning of a real high unless you hit the ultimate low :-). Keep smiling.

SatyU said...

@Pavitra

Thanku.. :)
N welcome to my world :)

Takecare

SatyU said...

@Pulkit
I would love to :)
Thanku very much :)

SatyU said...

@KM
I absolutely agree with the last lines :)
Thanku :)
N abt sadness.. Well not exactly.. Im happy too with my frnz n all and when Im sad I come up with these writeups just to vent it out.Thats it :)

Takecare
btw..Welcome :)

Ria said...

u r way too good!!this exuded so much of pain.

Dhanya said...

Ouch! :(

adreamygal said...

First time here ..Awesome poem ! Your words made me go through this and ouch it hurts !! Good work gal !

♫♪♥W!nK♥♪♫ said...

Beautifully written. Could feel it totally!
Thanks for your comment. Glad you liked my poem!

SatyU said...

@Ria
Thanku :)

Takecare

SatyU said...

@adreamygal

:)
Thanku :)

Takecare

SatyU said...

@Danya

Oops..sollie :)
Takecare

SatyU said...

@Wink

Thanku :)
Your poems are too good :)

Takecare

Sorcerer said...

Nice work!!
Loved the lines and it meant it :)

Esther said...

Awww :(

Sometimes I get this feeling!

Nice writings! =)

And I love your blog template ! :) :)

SatyU said...

@Sorcerer
Thanku :)

Takecare

SatyU said...

@Esther

Thanku :)
n Welcome to Emotions Set Free :)