Saturday, April 3, 2010

I Miss You

Finally the day has come when I was given a chance to see you.

I was starving for this one single chance.

It was a full moon day.

Sky was never this beautiful,

It was decorated with stars and moon was beaming out.

I was standing at your door, waiting for you to sleep.

I see you but I couldn't utter a a word.

My mouth was stitched.

When you were asleep,

I slowly entered your room and sat beside You.

I could touch you.

My eyes were filled with tears, tears out of pain and happiness.

I ran my hand smoothly through your hair,the way you always loved.

My lips were dry, they craved for your yours but were unable to reach out for them.

I kissed you on your forehead.

You were restless.

I blew some air near your neck,

You were relaxed.

I was starring at you,

Trying to capture your face in my eyes , mind and heart

I don't know when will I get this chance again.

I was silently praying to god not to send the sun.

I never wanted the moon to leave,

I just wanted to stop the time.

I implored the sun not to come out soon.

But even he is a puppet of time , he had to come out.

I don't wanna leave but I'm supposed to , that was the deal.

I got up,

Moved towards you,

With teary eyes I landed a kiss on your forehead and whispered "I Love You" in your ears.

I turned.

Someone was holding my hand,

I turned back.

I could see you opening your eyes .

I could hear the words which I desperately wanna hear from you,

It was " I Love You too "

I wanted to be in your arms , cry till the pain drains.

I was thirsty.

With my eyes closed ,I moved towards you.

Everything was ceased,

I reached for your lips,

My lips were just a moment away from its destination.

A ray of light fell on my face.

I slowly opened my eyes.

Suddenly everything turned in to a bizarre.

It was a dream,

I was lying on my bed.

You are not here.

I just dreamt of you again.

Tears trickled down my eyes

I Miss You

26 Feelings Expressed:

Anonymous said...

Oh this so 'love'ly yet sad :(!!! I loved this poem soooo much ...truly lovely and romantic ...:)

Mulling Over My Thoughts said...

Nice! Very nice! And depressing...and yet, really good!
I must say, great ability to imagine such emotions with such depth...and capture them in words!

PULKIT said...

may he reads this...

The Aspirant said...

well, u r becoming a genius yaar......seriously damn gud post.....

♫♪♥W!nK♥♪♫ said...

Aww...It's so sad but nicely written!
Loved the picture!!

PinkZz said...

so sad..!
deep scars of past :(

sm said...

very touch and emotional
very good

HaRy!! said...

as i said... i always relate yur post :( ... makes me damn!

Ria said...

so nicely written even thought its a bit sad!! :(

Shas said...

Sad and it a "Twilight" effect?

Dhanya said...

Hmmm... a wee bit sad, but really romantic!

SatyU said...

@dreamy gal
thanku so much :)


SatyU said...

@Mulling Over My Thoughts
Hey thanks mate :)


SatyU said...


haha.. :)

Takecare yaar

SatyU said...

@The Aspirant

Genius :O
Aisa kuch nahi hai yaar.. :)


SatyU said...


Thanku :)

SatyU said...


Not exactly dear.. I would rather call them " beautiful memories which brings tears in eyes but never miss make one smile " :)


SatyU said...


thanku :)


SatyU said...


I don't know what to say.. :(
Im sorry :(


SatyU said...

Thanku :)

SatyU said...


Twilight? :O
Oh.. okay okay.
No no yaar.. not at all. Its just a random thought thats it no influence of Twilight :)


SatyU said...


hmm..thanku :)

Tomz said...

Outflow from a sincere lover
Nice wordings
nice layout
and nice writing style

happy to be dropped here


Neev said...

sattu... >:D<

:( I am so sorry.. that I am so helpless.. and can't do anything for you.. :((

SatyU said...


Welcome here! :)

Thanku so much

SatyU said...

Arey koi na yaar.. you plz sad math rehna.. things are gonna be fine :)