Saturday, February 20, 2010


I see you closing the doors

I see you throwing people away from you

I see you breaking hearts

I see you locking up yourself in a room

I see you hurting yourself

I see everything.

Im restless ,

I feel helpless,

Its suffocating,

Its eating me inside,

Its cutting me,

Cutting me more than the pieces of our broken dreams.

It hurts me,

Hurts me more than when you asked me to stand on the other side of the door.

10 Feelings Expressed:

Arnav said...

True, We are hurt and feel helpless to a greater extent when our loved ones experiences pain ....

Great writing :)

PinkZz said...

aww.... such a painful description..
written beautifully ..!

~*~ Jal Pari ~*~ said...

Ah that feeling of helplessness. I know exactly as to what you mean.

Keep up the good work!

Charmed One! said...

Truly Touching!!!

SatyU said...


Yeah.. that pain.. Its unbearable. We can withstand any other pain in the world but can never ever can see our loved ones in pain.


SatyU said...

Thanku :)

SatyU said...

@Jal Pari

Thanku :)

SatyU said...

@Charmed one

Thanku :)

The Aspirant said...

dats beautifull written yaar.....
i dunt understand y am alwaz at d receiving end of dis helplessness...

SatyU said...

@The Aspirant

Dont worry yaar.. things gonna change :)